back in CG p12

[Bambin]

mais non c'est des pistolets! peroquets... n'imp'

[hidro.j]

me semble qu'on utilise les 2 mots..

moi je dis une molle..

[barth]

mais non c'est des pistolets! peroquets... n'imp'

faut il bien avoir fait... euuuh... merde... ah attends... *tapote dans une nouvelle fenetre l'adresse de son site perso, va dans la rubrique cv, chapitre formation... mmmh voila !*
donc oui je disais faut il bien avoir fait l'emca pour appeler ca un pistolet !






[mode running joke de merde=off]

[merwan]

C'est pas un beau débat ça?
Alors!
Si Jesus envoie pas ses planches
la polémique risque de durer.

[Bambin]

me semble qu'on utilise les 2 mots..

si si justement

Barth>> a l'EMCA on nous apprends a manier le pistolet avec dexterite, si tu veux jouer aux cow boys et aux indiens c'est par la-bas que ca se passe

[barth]

nan mais en plus ca fait nul aujourd'hui d'avoir des phylacteres bien propres...

y a plus que dans blake et mortimer que t'en trouves...

[berseker]

C'est marrant, tu as mis "aujourd'hui" et "Blake et Mortimer" dans le meme post

[barth]

Blake et Mortimer, les sarcophages du 6e continent. 2004.
http://www.amazon.fr/exec/obidos/ASIN/2 ... 88-3087346

2004, on peut considerer que c'est aujourd'hui non ?












... je me sens d'une humeur floodeuse moi aujourd'hui.

[berseker]

toutes les dates indiquees sont av J.C. Je connais des gens qui sont morts de vieillesse sans jamais avoir connu Blake et Mortimer autrement que dans un etat de decomposition avance.

[jesus_kryst]

ca as l'air d'étre un instrument diabolique ce perroquet ,un truc de psychopathe de la pub ,ou de l'archi

sinon pour les philactéres ,je vais plutot me la donner a la sfar tieng ....(blague)

hé sinon on tapes pas sur juillard dans mon thread c'est un des mes ex-dessinateurs préférés.

[LeSeanThomas]

bon me revoilou avec des croquisses
des recherches persos nini,je vais attaquer dans a peu pres 2 semaine le temps de decompresser un peu du boulot ,allez voir less assedics ,la famille tout ca ,tout ca et aprés c'est parti pour de bon ...



















un bao battle de memoire vite fait pasque je trouves pu mon bouquin


un truc juste comme ca

this are really cute sketches man.

do you have anything more complete? or finished?

[jesus_kryst]

i answer to you there ,i am out from school since nearly 2 years ,i worked as a storyboarder on the Atom Action man show .
i am currently working with patrouchef on my own comic book for a french editeur delcourt .

about finished things i am well known for doing a lots of unfinished things so i dont have many inked colored and finished suffs .

here are some old pages done somthing like 2 or 3 years ago of the comics iam working on ,iam currently doing again those pages


http://fafa.togora.free.fr/dossiernini/ ... 1small.jpg

http://fafa.togora.free.fr/dossiernini/ ... mallvc.jpg

http://fafa.togora.free.fr/dossiernini/ ... bsmall.jpg
if it dont bother you ,i would happily require youre advice on the new pages when they will be done

[LeSeanThomas]

I think your shot choices are really good. i dont know the story and this is obviously out of context for me to understand, but judging from whats here, you really think about your surroundings well and your characters appear to live in those environments believably.

There are apparent anatomy issues, but real anatomy doesnt seem to be your strong point. youre style's more of CARTOONISH nature than REAL ANATOMY. your gestures are solid though.


i think my only suggestion would be is you have TOO MANY panels per page. I think those three pages should be FIVE PAGES. Spread out the panels. For example, some of those panels appear to be more important than others, yet, they all seem to be relatively the SAME size, taking away their importance and creating a feel of redundancy (or a little repetative, boring).Figure out which panels are the most important, so they can be the more dominant panels on the page creating BALANCE and DRAMATIC WEIGHT.

Remember: the most important action in your page should be the BIGGEST PANEL ON THE PAGE. which, would eventually control pacing, what you are trying to tell the reader and maximize dramatic effect of your paneling.

I'm not familiar with European comic book or graphic novel page and panel formatting, but these days i cater to more of a manga-like pacing. you have some really great shots in some of these panels and i fear that they will be lost because there's so many of them fighting eachother for space.

I would suggest looking at Katsuhiro Otomo's "AKIRA" or "BLADE of the IMMORTAL" mangas for an excellent example of pacing, panel-count and sizing.


thoughts?

[jesus_kryst]

thanks for the advice i completly agree ,in the new pages iam doing , i try to be more "effective" with the use of my panel .

from what i saw the standard format in european comics books is 46 pages ,compared to mangas or american comics the story are more dense and it is supposed to happend many things in one pages ,this is not what i like the most because i am essentialy a manga readers .but it is sure that i cant adopt a pace like the one in akira .for example iam very interrested in fighting sequences but i cant use 20 pages to describes ones like in mangas so i'll have to fit in ...
the difficulty is to fond something "équilibré"


i will show you some of storyboard by private message if you agree so you will tell me what you think .

[Fred]

"équilibré"-> well balanced?

Tain, vivement tes nouvelles planches!!!